π¨ The introduction goes off in two different ways without any transitions or headings: first, Iβm reading about components then, about how and why Vue is so popular. I would get readers in with the popularity of Vue then at the beginning of the technical explanations, I would talk about the components.
π¨ There were more fun and useful emojis used near the end but not as much in the beginning. I think for even headings, having that consistency would be nice if thatβs the design-route you wish to present.
π Overall, the content seems very useful and goes into great depth on the subject. I am a total #codenewbie when it comes to React and Vue so I couldnβt really understand a lot of the terms and procedures. If your audience is for someone who is familiar with those frameworks, then I think youβre on a great track. If youβre trying to bring in newbies like me, Iβm getting lost without some simpler explanations.
I hoped my input helped somewhat! I'll be looking forward to the finished article. I got a lot of insight of your writing style and design from this which helps me out to find ways to make my own better π
I'll work on the π¨, π₯ points that you have brought up. They are very helpful :D
I was trying to fit the points into the format of the template hehe so that's why the emojis were quite absent initially and that's also why the introduction also feels off and going into 2 different ways. I will stick less to it and make it more fluent like your tips :P
Yes, it's working now. I'll take a read and reply with any feedback!
I just finished my reading and wanted to give some feedback! I organized my points into: π© good comments, π¨ some suggestions, and π₯ critical points or errors I found.
I hoped my input helped somewhat! I'll be looking forward to the finished article. I got a lot of insight of your writing style and design from this which helps me out to find ways to make my own better π
Thank you Khloe for the great feedback!
I'll work on the π¨, π₯ points that you have brought up. They are very helpful :D
I was trying to fit the points into the format of the template hehe so that's why the emojis were quite absent initially and that's also why the introduction also feels off and going into 2 different ways. I will stick less to it and make it more fluent like your tips :P
Awesome collaboration here. Love to see it :)