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Discussion on: #CNC2021 "Write More" Mission 2 [pt. I] Submission Thread

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Khloe Brown

Hello! 👋

Thank you for your reply and feedback! I looked over and highlighted your comments and critiques to review my own work.

For the header section, definitely I'll work on a better title name that goes with the content under it 😄

For my paragraphs with the superscripts, I plan on having some sort of implementation of a glossary for readers to learn about more technical terms I use. Do you think if I include the glossary at the bottom it would be efficient or should I just have the definition or explanation next to the word in the paragraph?

I also will work on transitioning with my quotes, tips and flow of instruction as well.

Thank you again for your feedback, it was very helpful! 🤗

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Estee Tey

I think it will be better if you include definitions directly next to them when you introduce them for less reading fatigue! unless you plan to reveal those definitions one by one through your steps 😄

you could have at the end a list of resources that will expand more on each of those if you want to.

Glad that my feedback helped!