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Discussion on: #CNC2021 "Write More" Mission 2 [pt. II] Submission Thread

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Khloe Brown • Edited

Hello, Hello 👋

My rough draft is quite...rough 😅 But that's why I'm posting it here!

I'm not quite done but what I do have written I would like some different eyes and brains on it to help me work with my flow so far. It's a bit wordy and I tend to ramble so any critiques are greatly appreciated!

I would love some feedback to help find ways to improve my grammar, paragraph length, words and phrases and anything else from my draft.

My unpublished rough draft: #CNC2021: Write More - Tutorial Blog (Rough Draft)