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𝕁𝕦𝕝𝕚𝕒 👩🏻‍💻

Hi everyone. Here is my draft on my blog post about communication for devs. Happy about every comment and suggestions for improvement. 😇

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abdulrrazzaq • Edited on

Hi Julia BTW good works congratulation you did very well, my note is if you can reduce and merge paragraphs from your article I feel there is some repetition. especially the intro I don't know but in the first 3 paragraphs, you need to choose only one style, or do I miss something?
however good job there 🙌

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𝕁𝕦𝕝𝕚𝕒 👩🏻‍💻

Thank you for your suggestion. I will check on them and update my article :)